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Old 05-07-2008, 01:23 AM   #44 (permalink)
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Thanks a bunch for catching the missing "c" in raccoon and missing "her" in the sentence. Other eyes are such a great help. I edited them already.



Not only is her hair brown when Dieter sees her, it's long instead of short, as in Erik's narrative. Careful mystery readers are supposed to remember the differences, even suppose it may be writer-error . . . until later. Again, good catch.
IT is very exciting to watch this unfold.. Good luck and God speed. J
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