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Old 05-06-2008, 10:52 PM   #43 (permalink)
Chase
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Correcting typos my favorite pastime.
Thanks a bunch for catching the missing "c" in raccoon and missing "her" in the sentence. Other eyes are such a great help. I edited them already.

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Chapter 3 . . . Heroine's hair changed from blonde to brown.
Not only is her hair brown when Dieter sees her, it's long instead of short, as in Erik's narrative. Careful mystery readers are supposed to remember the differences, even suppose it may be writer-error . . . until later. Again, good catch.
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