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Old 05-06-2008, 03:21 PM   #42 (permalink)
Bottesini
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Correcting typos my favorite pastime.

Chapter 2

1. Raccoon instead of racoon

2.Paragraph 6 should say "saw her costume" instead of "saw costume"

Chapter 3

1. Heroine's hair changed from blonde to brown.

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