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Originally Posted by Chase
"Submerciless," because I like to combine words to make unique titles.
The best poetry is the brightest possible image in the fewest possible words. Although dispair poems aren't my favorite, this one's image sticks with me.
Just personal, but I favor rhyme over blank or free verse because I think it helps establish beat and memory.
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I wrote this because I was seeing other dark poems and wondered it I could do it.
It can have many meanings, depending on how deep you want to think about it. People can get sucked into material success or addictions or sex & pedphilia, pornography or you name it, and they somehow lose themselves... Even if they are still living and breathing, their souls get hardened and they are dead to what use to make them human.
I hope this rhymed. I am posting a new one today, a little cynical,,, but from the heart. I have a real problem with people who lord themselves over others and use religion to make themselves feel superior, not to count how they use the average person for personal gain. It is called the Truths you tell.