Well, my second try and the attatchment did not attatch again. Finally, I think we got it... Beam me up scotty.
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Originally Posted by dreamchaser
I have tried to revamp this story as Vampy suggested. I added a new beginning, and fixed what I think he said to fix.
Your feedback is the only way I will learn,, Hate it, like or love it... it's all good........I need your opinion. If it is cheesey, just tell me.
Thanks for your time in reading and responding.  I'm not worthy.. :bowdo wn:
Jeanie... Still chasin the dream for a better tomorrow for Everybody!
To all my mods who are so tender and patient with me. Forgive me if this ends up under the wrong thread category... my account is still messing up... I tried to get it into creative writing.  |