04-25-2008, 04:19 PM
|
#57 (permalink)
|
|
Premium Member
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Salem, Oregon
Posts: 6,381
|
I think your story is fine. I dont see any mistakes at all. (Or I must be overlooked  )
Your story is so great to read! 
__________________
"Pragmatic language is a vital social skill that enables the school-aged child to navigate their way through demanding social situations." -- R. Owens
|
|
|