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Originally Posted by Ozzie
I'll be gentle as I can so forgive me if I sound harsh or picking. 
Is this the 1st chapter?, or a short story?
Little girl’s Mom … conjecture here? how do you know, it could be an aunt or whomever?
Both of them deaf, or the girl? … presumption here?
“I have enrolled in the Deaf interpreting/advocate program at my local college.” … Does that seem technical sounding of the words/harsh among the reflective words at the beginning, or is that your intention? |
OOOPS: forgot to answer the question, yes both mom and daughter are Deaf, and it was suppose to be assumed from the text.
Also, the writing assignment was to tell about a life changing event and the outcome.
I hope to one day write a real story that can go deeper and expound more without the limitations of the assignment objective.