07-19-2007, 10:30 PM
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: Salem, Oregon
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Originally Posted by jclarke
Hmmmm
Your weakness is that the describing of the story like for example where the story is set needs improvement but some of like "Evil spirit" is very good at the least but To find your weakness I need to see more stories of yours - in modern day (today)
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Hmm.. i'll think about that
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