Originally Posted by Mann_K05
Ok, tell me what's your suggestion on my weakness?
You seems not have any problem with writing.
Your weakness is that the describing of the story like for example where the story is set needs improvement but some of like "Evil spirit" is very good at the least but To find your weakness I need to see more stories of yours - in modern day (today)
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